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Everyone has a valid opinion...and here they all are. Note that I have not removed any of the comments from this page unless asked to. If you don't like something and what to voice your opinion then that's fine, I'll post it here aswell. Like I said, Everyone has a valid opinion. Any cursive language I'll -bleep- out and any spoilers will also be -bleep- out. And if you swear directly at me in a comment...then then -bleep- you!
Epic! Can't wait to see the movie, especially where her mouth was opening wider to fit entirely over mine.
-bela
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Epic! Can't wait to see the movie, especially where her mouth was opening wider to fit entirely over mine.
-max123
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Wow.
Just... Wow.
That was great. That is far and beyond my favorite type of vore, soft and usually willing, with no digestion, same-size, etc. The plot was interesting, the characters were unique, and the long build-up to the first scene made that unbirth scene all the better.
I would recommend either proofreading it again or getting someone to do it for you, since some of the writing errors go beyond the occasional grammatical error into the "that makes no sense" territory. i.e. "She pussy so tight that the air was pushed out of my lungs,," or simply ".door".
That said, despite being used to picking out grammatical errors, I barely noticed any in this simply because I was so entranced in the story. Rather than skimming it, like I do with most works on this site, I read every single word and even went back to reread a few sections after finishing them, just to savor them more.
This was excellent. Please, please write more.
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Also, keeping someone's interest through 25,000 words when they came expecting a short fetish fic is impressive.
-Kingoyaks
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Wow, that's a pretty lengthy story. I'm honestly intimidated. 
I'm sorry to say I don't know if I will actually be able to sit through all of it though.
-Houyo
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One of the few times I have enjoyed Cock Vore in a story.
Long and interesting story with many different aspects of what's one this website.
Over all a great read and I congratulate you for such good work 
-Madness
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you weren't kidding when you said it was lengthy... no promises, but I will try to read it. 
-Rat_Haus
Love this story.Is there gonna be second part to it?
-max123
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just finished reading "Our holiday," and I'm quite impressed. There was a great build-up, some well placed foreshadowing, interesting characters and unique motives.
I dont want to say much about the story because the author doest want to reveal any spoilers, but I would reccomend checking it out.
-Maurt899
